Saturday, June 29, 2013

Screen play


Dialogue Split by Action When a character is speaking and then there's some Action and then the character continues speaking, you indicate the continuation like this: DR. STRANGE This will be my crowning achievement! Life from life. Reincarnation while in the body. Zelda enters. DR. STRANGE (continuing) Never again will death be feared. I have bested the universe. Zelda slowly reaches for the power cord to Strange's machines. DR. STRANGE (continuing; sobbing) Why couldn't I have been just one month faster, poor Eliza, my love? Notice that if you have a continuing indicator and a Parenthetical, you put the continuing first, then add a semi-colon and a space, then type the Parenthetical. In TV and Sitcom scripts, the continuing indicator is placed as an Extension and abbreviated CONT'D, like this: DR. STRANGE This will be my crowning achievement! Life from life. Reincarnation while in the body. Zelda enters. DR. STRANGE (CONT'D) Never again will death be feared. I have bested the universe. Some people don't use continuing indicators. If you know you shouldn't use them, don't, otherwise you'll be fine if you do. Emphasis in Action When you write your Action, there are times where you will capitalize certain words or phrases for emphasis. For example: CARL BANNER shoves open the glass door. It hits the wall and the glass SHATTERS. The sample above shows the two most common uses of capitalization. First, when you introduce a character (the first time you type his/her name in Action), capitalize the name. Only capitalize the name the first time you use it, not every time. The second capitalization indicates a Sound Effect. The glass "shatters." The reason that Sound Effects or SFX (see Abbreviations) are capitalized is to alert the production people to the need for the sound effect. That's why emphasizing sound effects is optional and, frankly, I don't recommend it unless, of course, you know that the reader expects it. A much less common use of capitalization is to emphasize camera directions. Because this falls WAY into the realm of ...don't direct it, I really suggest you not do this unless you know it's expected. Just so you understand what I mean, here's a sample: As the circus caravan continues, we FOLLOW the sad clown and ZOOM IN to SEE that it's really Mrs. Clearson in disguise. Abbreviations There are certain ideas that are so commonly used in film scripts that they have abbreviations. Some of these are used as Extensions, like O.S. and V.O. Some of these are used in page breaks or when Action splits Dialogue, like CONT'D. Others show up in Action. The most familiar are "b.g." -- background, "f.g." -- foreground. For example: John mows the lawn while, in the b.g., a plane crashes. Runners cross the finish line as bushes in the f.g. start to shake and twitch. Should you use them? Your call. I find them distracting and think that a script is easier to read without them. But if it's important to communicate foreground or background (don't forget "don't direct"), use them as necessary. Some writers put them uppercase. Others use them lowercase. Again, it's up to you. Another common abbreviation is used in Shots. It's POV, for point of view. As if we're looking out the eyes of a character. No periods in POV. BOB Marty, where are you? MARTY'S POV Looking through the giant carpet fibers at Bob approaching the 20-foot shoe! Another one that you'll see every now and then is MOS. MOS means silent, without sound ("mit out zound" as the old German directors would say... some claim this is the origin of . I've never used MOS; it's really one of those cues that's there for the production staff. If the sound guy sees a day's worth of MOS scenes, he knows he's got the day off. Short Lines Definition Short Lines, or Forced Line Breaks, are used in Action and Dialogue for certain types of emphasis. Description Short Lines look like this: STEVEN And now, New York Haiku by Steven Sashen, Zen Poet. (reading a poem) The East River. A Frog Jumps in. OUCH! The Short Lines are the Haiku (okay, it's not really a Haiku). Notice how the lines end before the normal right Dialogue margin. This is a common use of Short Lines, poetry, lyrics, etc. In Action, Short Lines are usually used to separate different bits of Action without creating new Action elements. So, the normal version like this: Simmons walks up to the safe, making sure he isn't followed by the other troopers. He turns the dial. Click. He turns it the other way. Click. versus the Short Line way: Simmons walks up to the safe, making sure he isn't followed by the other troopers. He turns the dial. Click. He turns it the other way. Click. Short Lines are not that common and some people don't like them for anything other than things like lyrics. Dialogue Paragraphs Definition Dialogue Paragraphs create the effect of a pause in a Character's Dialogue. Description There are two circumstances where you see Dialogue Paragraphs. The first is a simple pause in a Character's Dialogue. The second is when a Character's Dialogue is interrupted by some Action. In the first instance, a Dialogue Paragraph just looks like a blank line tossed in the middle of the Dialogue. It looks that way because, that's what it is. Like this: COMMANDER You, over there with the scanning beam. Get me a reading on the solar flare. And you, with the sexy underwear on under your suit. Get into my ready room! The second instance is just like the first, but includes some Action in between the pieces of Dialogue, like this: COMMANDER You, over there with the scanning beam. Get me a reading on the solar flare. A beautiful cadet walks by. And Commander uses his x-ray scope. And you, with the sexy underwear on under your suit. Get into my ready room! I can't say do or don't use Dialogue Paragraphs, or do use the first kind but not the second, or vice versa. Dialogue Paragraphs have been popping up more and more lately, but they're still very stylistic. So, as always, use your best judgment, based on the effect you're trying to create and the expectations of your readers. Montage and Series of Shots A montage is a series of small related scenes, grouped together. A montage example you'll be familiar with is the "falling in love" montage where we see shots of our glowing couple at the amusement park, looking over the ocean, feeding each other dinner, dancing in the rain and, finally... well, you know. Often montages are silent scenes that have music or some other sound over them. A Series of Shots is similar to a montage, but takes place in one location during one piece of time. Think of a chase scene when you see a car racing through the street, then a baby carriage wheeled across the street, then the cop chasing the first car, then the first car narrowly missing the baby carriage and the cop car having to stop to avoid hitting it. Montages and Series of Shots are formatted the same way: MONTAGE OF THE UFOs LANDING A) The ship settles on the Washington Monument. B) Humans are rounded up into Candlestick Park as more ships land in the parking area. C) An African tribal leader chats with one of the aliens. SERIES OF SHOTS A) Police swarm the Federal Building. B) Ambulances swerve into the driveway. C) SWAT teams aim their guns. Just to note, the first line "Montage of..." is a Scene Heading. The first line of "Series of Shots" is a Shot. The other lines are Action elements. You could just say "MONTAGE" without the "OF THE UFOs LANDING." Whether you add the extra description is up to you. It's also optional whether you, at the end of a Montage or Series of Shots, add an Action line that says: END MONTAGE or END SERIES OF SHOTS If you write the Montage or Series of Shots well, it's obvious when they end, so I would avoid the ending indicators. Supers - Titles, Signs, etc. A Super is something that is superimposed over another thing. Sub-titles are supers. But, for your purposes, a Super is more likely some descriptive text like a time or location or a translation. Supers are written with Action elements.. For example: INT. PENTAGON, WAR ROOM - DAY SUPER - 10:15 Zulu, Present Time The council gathers around the table. What this means is that when we cut to the War Room, the words"10:15 Zulu, Present Time" will appear on the screen over the image of the council gathering. Another example: Marty looks at the sign which is in Arabic. SUPER - Do Not Enter. Death Penalty Enforced. MARTY This must be the place. He walks in the door. Titles Some writers like to indicate when the film's title sequence should start and end by writing: BEGIN TITLES END TITLES Phone calls and Intercuts Intercuts are when we switch back and forth between two or more scenes quickly and repetitively. Most often we see intercuts when characters are speaking on the phone and we jump back and forth between them. Sometimes intercuts happen with scenes that are related by time, but not dialogue, like when we see someone dismantling a bomb and cut back and forth between that person and the people in a safe place who check their watches, waiting for him. Intercuts have also been used in time travel situations. All you want to do is start the intercut and let the director decide how to do it. Like this: EXT. HWY. 57, PHONE BOOTH - DAY Jessie runs into the booth and quickly dials a number. Intercut with... INT. MULDOON'S OFFICE - DAY Muldoon grabs the phone almost before it rings. MULDOON Yea, what' up? JESSIE He's here! Hurry! Often the intercut will end at the next Scene Heading. If you want the intercutting to end in one of the locations you've been using, just reuse that Scene Heading. So, to do that by continuing the above scene, we get: MULDOON We got you, Jess. Just leave the phone off the hook and hide out till we get there. JESSIE Okay. Please hurry! Jessie drops the phone so the receiver dangles. He runs away. MULDOON (to his assistant) Get a trace on this. Fast! EXT. HWY. 57, PHONE BOOTH - DAY A gloved hand hangs up the phone. So you can see that when the Action refers to Jessie dropping the phone, it's obvious that the director will have to cut to that location. But we really emphasize the return to the phone booth by adding the Hwy. 57 Scene Heading. Realize, of course that you can have a phone conversation without intercutting. The scene takes place in one location and the person on the other end of the phone talks in voice-over.

Secrets of script writing


Action Definition Action is also called "business" or "description." It's what we see on the screen or stage. It describes, in the most visual way it can, what happens. Description What to say about Action? Here's a sample: Mark walks down the hall. He looks in the bedroom and, seeing nothing, scratches his head. He continues down the hall with a curious expression on his face. Notice that the above action doesn't read like this: Mark walks down the hall. He thinks there might be something in the bedroom, so he looks in. He wonders why he doesn't see anything and scratches his head. "Hmmm," he thinks and then continues down the hall. The difference? The first one shows it, the second one tells it. We can't see a character thinking. But we know that characters who are thinking will behave in a certain way. Describe the behavior, not the intangible mental process. In Action, you have more room to make your writing creative than you do in other elements, but I recommend you use your creativity to tell the story well, not to show off your vocabulary or cool prose technique. You want the reader to be impressed with and immersed in the story, not hung up on you. Trust me, if you keep an agent engrossed in your story for 120 pages, she'll be infinitely more impressed with you than if your Action reads like Hemingway. Use your action paragraphs wisely. Depending on the effect you're trying to create, you can either put each separate action in its own paragraph or lump a bunch of action into one. For example, the following shows the effects of separate paragraphs: The Alien stalks the surviving crew members, slowly gaining on their position. Commander Walker, checks his scanner for life signs. Nothing. Notice how that builds the tension and keeps the images separate in your mind. Next let's see the effect of putting many actions in one paragraph: The ball flies high into center. Miller chases it, sliding on the wet grass. Halloway runs from left toward the ball, too. Fans reach over the center field wall, fighting for position to catch the dropping ball. Miller dives. Halloway leaps. The fans jostle... You'll have to see the movie to find out what happens next. But do you see the different kind of tension that putting all those actions together creates? So, use Action to create the effects you want to create in the mind of the reader. One other thing. Avoid passive verbs and conjugations of "to be" (is, isn't, am, are, etc.). Also, avoid prepositional phrases when a good adjective or adverb will do. These two things bore the reader and usually take up more room than their more interesting, active replacements. Which sentence reads better to you: Banner paces in his cell, running his fingers through his mohawk hair. or Banner is pacing in his cell and is running his fingers through his hair which is in a mohawk style. Boy,. I sure hope you liked the first one better. It's more powerful, more active, more direct, more visual...just what a script should be. Formatting Simple. Use the same margins as your Scene Headings: 1.5" from the left and 1" from the right. Action is mixed case and single spaced. There is one blank line before each Action paragraph (sometimes, there will be zero blank lines, when you need to use Short Lines). Sometimes, in Action, you'll want to capitalize certain words... we'll talk about that in the Emphasis chapter. There are also occasions for using specific abbreviations. Scene Headings Definition A Scene Heading, also known as a Slugline (from typesetting days), tells the reader where a scene takes place. In other words, where are we standing? Where do we put the camera? Look at some of the examples below: Description EXT. JIM'S HOUSE, PATIO - NIGHT INT. CONNER AEROSPACE, CONNER'S OFFICE - ESTABLISHING INT./EXT. WALKER FARMHOUSE, KITCHEN - CONTINUING SPACE MISSION 6 H.Q., 1900Z - SUNLIGHT These might look very different to you, but notice the sections of the Scene Headings and they'll start to feel the same. The Scene Headings start with an indication of whether you're inside or outside. INT. means "interior." EXT. means "exterior." Sometimes you might want to use EXT./INT. if, for example, a scene starts outside and moves inside, or INT./EXT. if it moves the other way. You don't need to use the combination descriptions. It's just as likely you can start the scene EXT. JIM'S HOUSE, OUTSIDE and, at the appropriate time, the scene changes to INT. JIM'S HOUSE, INSIDE The next part of the Scene Heading tells where you are, generally. In other words, at a house, in a building, at a park, etc. The key here is the generality. As you reuse these, you want to be consistent. That is, don't refer to Jim's house as "JIM'S HOUSE," "JIM JONES'S HOUSE" and "MR. JONES'S RESIDENCE." You want to keep this consistent so the reader can easily know where you are in general terms. If your script is in production, you want these to be consistent so the production manager can easily find and schedule all the scenes that take place at that location. Believe me, the last thing you want is a Production Manager or Assistant Director screaming, "What do you mean this is supposed to be the same location we were at last week? We tore down the location we were at last week!" The next part of the Scene Heading is the specific description of where you are. If you're at a house, where in the house? If you're in a space ship, which compartment of the ship? You might not need to use this part of the Scene Heading if it isn't relevant. If, for example, you're EXT. BIG OFFICE BUILDING, that might be all the relevant information you need for the scene. If it doesn't matter that you're EXT. OFFICE BUILDING, 2 FEET FROM THE STREET don't say it. In the last example above, we're in space (assumedly outside) the More about what to say and not say in "Show it don't tell it, but don't direct it... unless you have to." When it comes to specifics, you might have to get really specific and add another level of description. Let's say, you're doing a time travel story and scenes in the same place jump between times. You might end up with INT. ASTRODOME, ON THE FIELD, 1996 and INT. ASTRODOME, ON THE FIELD, 2005 Another thing that you might put in the "specific" section is ESTABLISHING, like: EXT. EMPIRE STATE BUILDING, ESTABLISHING - DAY. This says that we just need a shot of the location so we can "establish" that this is where we are. Typically, after an establishing shot, the next scene takes place in a specific location at the same place. So, after establishing that we're at the Empire State Building, the next scene might be INT. EMPIRE STATE BUILDING, OBSERVATION DECK - DAY. The last piece of a Scene Heading is the timing section. DAY and NIGHT are the most common ones you'll use. If you need to get more specific, do it. If the scene needs to happen as the sun sets, say SUNSET. If the scene takes place 20 minutes after that, you can say DUSK. Production Managers hate scenes that take place around sunrise and sunset because you only get one chance at getting that shot on any day. Don't let that stop you from writing romantic sunset scenes, though. Just realize you might be the catalyst for an anxious assistant director actually yelling the famed cliche, "Come on people, we're losing light here!" When you have a number of scenes in a row that take place in a continuous manner, it seems silly to keep saying - DAY at the end of each of the Scene Headings. You have a couple of choices here. One is using the timing indicator, "CONTINUING." Look at the following example: EXT. DAYTONA SPEEDWAY, PIT STOP - DAY Miller puts on his racing suit and steps into the Indy car. INT. MILLER'S CAR - CONTINUING In another situation, with multiple scenes occurring In the same general location in a continuous manner, you can leave out the timing indicator:or use "SAME TIME" INT. CLAIRE'S HOUSE, LIVING ROOM - DAY Claire watches TV with her kids INT. CLAIRE'S HOUSE, DINING ROOM - SAME TIME The dog eats scraps under the table. INT. CLAIRE'S HOUSE, BEDROOM Dad knits a skirt. If you have multiple scenes occurring at the same time, use the timing indicator "SIMULTANEOUS." For example: INT. CHEZ STADIUM, KITCHEN - DAY A bomb ticks its way down from 2 minutes. EXT. CHEZ STADIUM, PARKING LOT - SIMULTANEOUS The spy checks his watch as it counts down from 2 minutes. You can also use "SAME TIME" instead of "SIMULTANEOUS" These aren't all the time indicators possible, but certainly the most common. Use your common sense, artistic license and good judgment to create whatever you need. Remember, the whole point of a Scene Heading is simply to tell the reader quickly, easily and efficiently, where the scene takes place. Formatting The first thing you may have noticed is that Scene Headings are uppercase... ALWAYS. Next, you may have noticed that the INT or EXT is followed by a period. Occasionally, you'll see other punctuation like a colon or a dash or no punctuation. Don't do this unless you know that the person who is reading your script expects something other than a period. The spacing after the period is also up for debate. Two spaces after the period is common and accepted. One space is also okay. This one's more up to your aesthetic sense than industry rules. Use whichever you like best unless you know that the expected reader prefers one or the other. The general description is usually separated from the specific location description by a comma. Again, rarely, you'll see something else, like a dash. Don't do this unless the reader expects it. Similarly, the punctuation before the time indicator is most often a space, a dash and another space. Sometimes you'll see no spaces, sometimes you'll see two dashes, sometimes you'll see no spaces and two dashes. Not to sound like a broken record, but use the former unless you know the reader expects something else. The margin settings are 1.5" from the left edge of the page to 1" from the right edge. You want to keep your Scene Headings to one line, if possible. If you need a Scene Heading that takes two lines, try to break up the text at one of the natural break points: between the general and specific locations, for example. You do not want to break a Scene Heading so the time indicator is the only thing on the second line. Finally, you would like to have 2 blank lines before each Scene Heading. Yes, this will make your script longer than if you had only 1 blank line preceding the Scene Heading and, yes, 1 blank line is acceptable. Two blanks looks better and also makes the script read faster. So, if you can, use 2. If you have to, to keep the script from being too long, use 1. As always, if the reader expects something specific, give it to her/him. With Scriptware Easy. With Scriptware you never type a Scene Heading more than once. And you can type an entire Scene Heading with just 4 keystrokes! If the cursor is flashing on a blank line, just type INT. or EXT. You can also press from almost anywhere to create a new Scene Heading. When you do either of these, Scriptware pops up a list of your existing Scene Headings. Just start typing until you've either selected the one you want or created a new one. Then press and Scriptware shows you a list of times of day. Type the first letter of the time you want and press . Pressing at the end of a Scene Heading will put you in the right place to start typing Action. Character Name Definition Couldn't be more obvious, the Character Name element is where you indicate who's talking. Description Not much to say, except that you want to be consistent. Don't call a character MR. JONES in one part of the script and DAVE somewhere else (with Scriptware, it's easy to check to see if you've done this; you just look at the Character List and see who's on it... then you can change the wrong ones with just a keystroke or two). If you have two characters speaking simultaneously and saying the same thing, you can make a character name out of both of their names. For example: BOB AND RHONDA Wait! Stop! If you had two characters saying different things at the same time, use Dual-Column Dialogue. Try to avoid using Names that look similar to avoid confusing the reader. Some suggest that you don't have two characters who have names that start with the same letter for this same reason. To introduce a Character in a mysterious way, by hearing her/his voice, without revealing who it is, call the character something like MAN'S VOICE or WOMAN'S VOICE. Since we're hearing but not seeing them, it would typically be: MAN'S VOICE (V.O) or WOMAN'S VOICE (O.S.). (You wouldn't underline the extension, that's happening because those are links). Then, in the Action, you can reveal to the reader that: ...we see that the voice belongs to: MARTHA Hello, dear. Formatting A Character Name is uppercase, 3.5" from the left edge of the page. There is one blank line before a Character Name. With Scriptware With Scriptware, you can type a character name with just one keystroke! If you're on a blank line, just press . Scriptware will put the cursor in the Character Name position and pop up a box with every character name you've already typed. If you just start typing, the one you want will appear (this usually takes just one keystroke). If you're typing a new name, just type it in; Scriptware automatically adds it to the list so you'll never have to type it again! Dialogue Definition Dialogue is simply every word we hear on the screen. Everything that comes out of everyone's mouth (whether we see them on the screen or not). Description Simply, write what you want your characters to say. BOB But I don't know what to say. It's not like I, well, it's not like this is something I enjoy. There's not a whole lot of advice to give here beyond the ever-present, "show it, don't tell it." Apocalypse Now could have been a guy's head, on the screen, as he narrated the story, but who would pay to see that?! Same thing in your dialogue: see if there's a way to write so that we get to see something rather than hear someone talk about it (unless you have a good, dramatic reason, to not show us... ooooohhhh, mysterious). In a similar vein, be careful of monologues. Readers get a bit concerned when they see a page that's 99% Dialogue. After all, for movies and TV shows at least, we want to see something beyond a talking head. If you have a monologue, ask yourself, "Are there ways to break this up with some action (either the speaking character's, the listening character's, or something in the environment)?" Breaking up a monologue makes a page read faster and, remember, we want them to keep turning the pages! Formatting Dialogue margins are 2.5" from the left and 2.5" from the right. With Scriptware After you've typed your Character Name or Extension, just press and Scriptware will put you in the right place to start typing your Dialogue... just type away. Parenthetical Definition A Parenthetical is a direction to the Actor about how to read the Dialogue. Description Here are some samples of dialogue with Parentheticals: BOB (sarcastic) Of course I love you. MARTHA (trying not to explode) Can't you be serious for once? (a beat, then) Wait, who are you? Here are some bad Parentheticals: MIKE (reaching for gun to shoot the alien) Stop! HARRY AND SALLY (they keep arguing as they walk out the door) Am not. Am too. Am not. Am too. What makes the second examples "bad" is that they're describing Action, not giving information to the actor about reading the line. In other words, proper format asks you to not do this: ZEKE I don't think you should stay (he cocks his shotgun) We don't want you here. but instead do this: ZEKE I don't think you should stay. He cocks his shotgun. ZEKE (continuing) We don't want you here. Notice the "continuing" Parenthetical above. You put those in when a character's dialogue is split by Action (or, sometimes a Shot.). Some studios insist on these, some insist you don't use these. So, again, I would use them unless I had a specific reason not to. If you had other Parenthetical direction to add, you would put it after the "continuing" like this: ZEKE (continuing; calmly) We don't want you here. Formatting Parenthetical margins are 3" from the left and 3.25" from the right. If a Parenthetical takes up more than one line, indent the lines after the first 1 character so that the text on all of the lines start in the same vertical column. Extension Definition An Extension is a technical indication about a character's Dialogue, placed to the right of the Character Name. For example, an indication that the dialogue happens off screen or as a voice-over. An Extension is not a place to tell the actor how to read the dialogue or to indicate some action happening on the screen. Description There are a couple of standard Extensions: O.S. and V.O. "O.S." means "off screen" -- the character is physically present, but not visible on the screen (behind a door, under a bed, etc.). On TV shows, you'll sometimes see O.C. (for off camera) instead of O.S. "V.O." means "voice-over" -- the character isn't on the screen but we hear the voice (a narrator, a voice on an answering machine, etc.). This is called a voice-over, because the actor records her/his voice at a time other than when the scene is being shot, and the voice is placed "over" the scene. It's still a voice over, though, if the actor records her/his voice and the recording is played back as the scene is being shot. DR. JOSEPH (O.S.) Hey, someone let me out of this freezer! WALLY (V.O.) That was when I knew... plug in the freezer! Formatting The Extension is uppercase and enclosed with ( )'s. There is one space between the end of a Character Name and the opening parenthesis of an extension. Shot Definition A Shot is an indication, within a scene, that the focus shifts to a specific person or thing. Description Here are some sample shots: CLOSE ON BOB'S NOSE ANGLE ON THE RANSOM NOTE MARK'S POV INSERT - TIMER OF THE BOMB BACK TO SCENE First things first: when using Shots, stay acutely aware of the Show It Don't Tell It, But Don't Direct It, rule! It's very easy to use Shots when they really aren't necessary at all, or when you could achieve the same effect with some well written Action. Like Transitions, you only want to use Shots when you really need them to convey a particular effect. Here's an example that's familiar to you: MAN'S VOICE (V.O.) This tape will self-destruct in five seconds. CLOSE ON THE TAPE RECORDER The tape begins to SIZZLE and slowly smolders until it's engulfed in smoke. You could make two arguments about that example. The first is that you need the Shot to emphasize the important event of the tape self-destructing. The contrary argument is that without the Shot, the Action makes it clear that the tape is self-destructing and you don't need to tell the director that he needs to be "close on the tape recorder" because she'll figure out how to shoot it on her own. Both of these arguments are valid. This is another case where you have to use your best judgment. Some studios, producers and shows that we know use shots extensively. Others, not at all. You find them more often in scripts that are in production, rather than those being submitted to be read. Notice the Shot "BACK TO SCENE." This is one that you might use after you have focused on a particular part of the scene to indicate that you want to return the focus, well... back to the scene in general. In the example above, you could do: CLOSE ON THE TAPE RECORDER The tape begins to SIZZLE and slowly smolders until it's engulfed in smoke. BACK TO SCENE Jim tosses the recorder into the trash and walks into the museum. Again, there's no specific list of Shots, use your imagination to create Shots that help tell your story in the most creative, simple and effective way you can. By the way, see Abbreviations if you don't know what POV means. Formatting Shots are uppercase and use the same margins as Scene Headings: 1.5" from the left (the right margin doesn't matter because you don't want a shot that takes more than one line). You normally want 1 blank line before a Shot, but some writers use 2, like a Scene Heading (sometimes they do this to lengthen a short script, sometimes it's for style). Transition Definition A Transition indicates that we are, in some way, moving to a different scene or shot. Description Some common Transitions are: CUT TO: PAN TO: FADE OUT. MATCH CUT: PULL BACK TO REVEAL: WIPE TO: DISSOLVE TO: There are dozens more... but the important thing is this: DON'T USE THEM! Most of the time you don't need Transitions. Think about it. If you have one scene, then another, it's obvious that you're cutting to that scene. Otherwise, how would you get there. So why say "CUT TO:"? Now "how" you cut to get there is a different story. The second reason to avoid Transitions falls into the "Don't Direct It" category. Again (and of course), there are reasons why you would undeniably need to use a Transition to achieve a particular effect (usually comedic or frightening) like: They walk off into the sunset. CUT TO: CLOSE UP of BOB's face. There's something odd about how he looks, his hairstyle, his coloring. PULL BACK TO REVEAL WE'RE: EXT. BIG CLIFF'S - DAY And we see that the man is actually hanging upside down from a bungee cord. Get it. There, the Transition is an important tool. It would have been boring to read: They walk off into the sunset. EXT. BIG CLIFF'S - DAY Bob hangs upside down from a bungee cord. It's not even worth describing what the different transitions mean since they're all directorial phrases (you can find them in editing books and directing books) and since so many of them are obvious and part of our colloquial speaking. If you really need a Transition, type whatever you like to best communicate the effect you want. There only two Transitions that you definitely want to use in every script: FADE IN: and FADE OUT. Start every script with FADE IN: and end every script with FADE OUT. (notice that it ends with a period, not a colon). Formatting Transitions are 5.5" from the left edge. They are uppercase and end with a ":" except the last FADE OUT. The first FADE IN: is a special Transition that has the same left margin as your Action, 1.5" from the edge. Dual-Column Dialogue Definition Dual-Column Dialogue (or Dual-Dialogue) is used to indicate two characters speaking simultaneously. Description Dual-Dialogue looks like this: MIKE BETH I'm singing in the rain... Stop it please, you're going Just singing in the rain... to make me crazy with your What a glorious feeling... damn singing! I'm happy again. (humming, now) VINNIE (O.S.) Hmm-hmmmm-hmm-hmm-hmm-hm... Could you shut the hell up! Hmm-hmmmm-hmm-hmm-hmm-hm... Some of us are trying not to Hmmm-hmmm-hmmmm-hmm-hmm-hmm vomit here. Hmm-hmmmm-hmm-hmm-hm. The essence of this is simple. Just two columns with normal Character Name, Parenthetical, Extension and Dialogue pieces in them. Remember, the idea here is when you have two (or more) characters speaking at the same time, saying different things. If you have more than one character speaking over another, just type it like the above. Which character is in which column is up to you. If example above, it makes more sense to have the singing in the left column since the people in the right column are reacting to it (the reader will see the singing first, and then read the reactions... you probably did that yourself, yes?). There will be situations where this is reversed based on the effect you're trying to create. If you have a character talking and, in the middle of his dialogue, you want someone else to start chatting away, just split up the first character's dialogue like this: ZELDA Like I was saying to Marty, Marty, I said, what's a guy like you doing in a retirement community like this? ZELDA IRIS (continuing) Oh, that Marty, what a And Marty, he says, Zelda, catch he is. If I still Marty says, I don't get had the you know what... it myself. I'd you know what. Formatting Dual-Dialogue margins are a bit narrower than standard Dialogue margins. For the first column, the Character Name starts 2 3/4" from the left, Parenthetical margins are 2 1/4" from the left and 4.5" from the right, Dialogue margins are 2" from the left and 4" from the right. For the second column, the Character Name starts 5 3/4" from the left, Parenthetical margins are 5 1/4" from the left and 1 1/4 from the right, and Dialogue margins are 5" from the left and 1" from the right. There is one blank line before the first Character Name in Dual-Dialogue (just like a regular Character Name). Act Numbers Definition The Act Number indicates what Act you're in. It can indicate the beginning of a new act or the continuation of the current Act. Act numbers are usually only used in Sitcom or Play scripts. Description Act Numbers look like this: ACT II ACT THREE ACT 4 The numbering style you use depends on both your taste and/or the style in use by the show for which you're writing. In other words, if you're writing a "Murphy Brown" script, use the numbering style that they use (more about this in Give 'em what they want There are a couple of other acts that don't have numbers but, instead, have names. If you have these, there will be no more than one before Act 1 that might be called TEASER, COLD OPENING, or PROLOGUE. There might also be one following the final act called EPILOGUE or TAG. In a sitcom, a teaser, or cold opening takes place before the first commercial break and the tag takes place after the last commercial. Both of these parts of the script don't have anything specifically to do with the story and could be removed from the show (which is often what happens when a show gets syndicated so that the syndicators can squeeze in more commercials). The prologue and epilogue occupy the same place at the beginning and end of the show, but are an integral part of the story. See what the show's standard for using these are before you decide you need to use them. Some shows only want you to put the Act Number on the first page of a new act. Others want you to put it there and on the first page of each new scene within the act (see Scene Numbers). Typically, there is only one scene in a Prologue, Teaser, Cold Opening, Tag, or Epilogue. Similarly, some shows want you to indicate the ending of an Act by typing something like: END OF ACT 5 END OF TEASER That would be the last line of the page, then, the top of the next page would be the next act. Formatting Act Numbers are uppercase. Center them horizontally on the page. For a new act, put the Act Number 2" from the top of the page. Start each new Act on a new page. The End Of Act indicator is also centered horizontally and uppercase. Put two blank lines between it and the last line at the end of the act. If a show uses letters instead of numbers for each act, it typically will not use certain letters. Most commonly, shows will not use the letters "i" or "o" because the capital versions of those letters look too much like the numbers one and zero. Scene Numbers Definition The Scene Number indicates that you're starting a new scene. Scene numbers are usually only used in Sitcom or Play scripts (in film scripts that are in production, the Scene Heading will be numbered, but that's a different story -- see Numbering?). Description Scene Numbers look like this: SCENE II SCENE THREE SCENE 7 SCENE P The numbering style you use depends on both your taste and/or the style in use by the show for which you're writing. In other words, if you're writing a "Cybill" script, use the numbering style that they use (more about this in Give 'em what they want.) Sometimes you will repeat the Act Number above the Scene Number like: ACT V SCENE 2 Then, the next scene is: ACT V SCENE 3 Some shows start renumbering the Scenes for each act, others let the Scene Numbers just continue to add sequentially. For example, this: ACT SIX ACT SIX ACT SEVEN SCENE D SCENE E SCENE F versus: ACT SIX ACT SIX ACT SEVEN SCENE D SCENE E SCENE A Like you would with Act Numbers, sometimes you will indicate the end of the Scene by putting END OF SCENE X at the end of the previous scene. Formatting Scene Numbers are uppercase and centered horizontally. If the Scene Number follows the Act Number, put one blank line before the Scene Number. Otherwise, put the Scene Number 2" from the top of the page. Start each new scene on a new page. If a show uses letters instead of numbers for each scene it typically will not use certain letters. Most commonly, shows will not use the letters "i" or "o" because the capital versions of those letters look too much like the numbers one and zero. If you have more than 26 scenes, start numbering from the 27th like this: AA BB CC DD EE FF, etc. If you use an End Of Scene indicator, put 2 blank lines between it and the last line of the previous scene. When both an Act and a Scene end, just use the End Of Act indicator. Cast List Definition The Cast List is used in Sitcom scripts to indicate which characters are speaking and appearing in the following scene. Description Cast Lists are on the line following Scene Headings and look like this: INT. JERRY'S APARTMENT - DAY (JERRY, ELAINE, GEORGE) SPACE - NEAR THE QUADRANGLE BORDER (DR. CONNER, MARCUS, JERRY, ELAINE, GEORGE) Check the format used for the show you're writing for the exact formatting specifics. The variations you'll see in Cast Lists include whether the list is in order of appearance or importance and, based on the above, whether the list shows speaking characters first, then non-speaking characters. Formatting The Cast List is on the line directly below a Scene Heading, enclosed in parenthesis, with the same margins as the Scene Heading. The specific show will determine if the Cast List should be uppercase or mixed-case and if there's a specific order they want you to use for the characters in the list.

Screenpaly


What is a Screenplay? In the most basic terms, a screenplay is a 90-120 page document written in Courier 12pt font on 8 1/2" x 11" bright white three-hole punched paper. Wondering why Courier font is used? It's a timing issue. One formatted script page in Courier font equals roughly one minute of screen time. That's why the average page count of a screenplay should come in between 90 and 120 pages. Comedies tend to be on the shorter side (90 pages, or 1 ½ hours) while Dramas run longer (120 pages, or 2 hours). A screenplay can be an original piece, or based on a true story or previously written piece, like a novel, stage play or newspaper article. At its heart, a screenplay is a blueprint for the film it will one day become. Professionals on the set including the producer, director, set designer and actors all translate the screenwriter's vision using their individual talents. Since the creation of a film is ultimately a collaborative art, the screenwriter must be aware of each person's role and as such, the script should reflect the writer's knowledge. For example, it's crucial to remember that film is primarily a visual medium. As a screenwriter, you must show what's happening in a story, rather than tell. A 2-page inner monologue may work well for a novel, but is the kiss of death in a script. The very nature of screenwriting is based on how to show a story on a screen, and pivotal moments can be conveyed through something as simple as a look on an actor's face. Let's take a look at what a screenplay's structure looks like. The First Page of a Screenplay While screenplay formatting software such as Final Draft, Movie Magic Screenwriter, Movie Outline and Montage frees you from having to learn the nitty-gritty of margins and indents, it's good to have a grasp of the general spacing standards. The top, bottom and right margins of a screenplay are 1". The left margin is 1.5". The extra half-inch of white space to the left of a script page allows for binding with brads, yet still imparts a feeling of vertical balance of the text on the page. The entire document should be single-spaced. The very first item on the first page should be the words FADE IN:. Note: the first page is never numbered. Subsequent page numbers appear in the upper right hand corner, 0.5" from the top of the page, flush right to the margin. Screenplay Elements Below is a list of items (with definitions) that make up the screenplay format, along with indenting information. Again, screenplay software will automatically format all these elements, but a screenwriter must have a working knowledge of the definitions to know when to use each one. Scene Heading Indent: Left: 0.0" Right: 0.0" Width: 6.0" A scene heading is a one-line description of the location and time of day of a scene, also known as a "slugline." It should always be in CAPS. Example: EXT. WRITERS STORE - DAY reveals that the action takes place outside The Writers Store during the daytime. Subheader Indent: Left: 0.0" Right: 0.0" Width: 6.0" When a new scene heading is not necessary, but some distinction needs to be made in the action, you can use a subheader. But be sure to use these sparingly, as a script full of subheaders is generally frowned upon. A good example is when there are a series of quick cuts between two locations, you would use the term INTERCUT and the scene locations. Action Indent: Left: 0.0" Right: 0.0" Width: 6.0" The narrative description of the events of a scene, written in the present tense. Also less commonly known as direction, visual exposition, blackstuff, description or scene direction. Remember - only things that can be seen and heard should be included in the action. Character Indent: Left: 2.0" Right: 0.0" Width: 4.0" When a character is introduced, his name should be capitalized within the action. For example: The door opens and in walks LIAM, a thirty-something hipster with attitude to spare. A character's name is CAPPED and always listed above his lines of dialogue. Minor characters may be listed without names, for example "TAXI DRIVER" or "CUSTOMER." Dialogue Indent: Left: 1.0" Right: 1.5" Width: 3.5" Lines of speech for each character. Dialogue format is used anytime a character is heard speaking, even for off-screen and voice-overs. Parenthetical Indent: Left: 1.5" Right: 2.0" Width: 2.5" A parenthetical is direction for the character, that is either attitude or action-oriented. With roots in the playwriting genre, today, parentheticals are used very rarely, and only if absolutely necessary. Why? Two reasons. First, if you need to use a parenthetical to convey what's going on with your dialogue, then it probably just needs a good re-write. Second, it's the director's job to instruct an actor on how to deliver a line, and everyone knows not to encroach on the director's turf! Extension Placed after the character's name, in parentheses An abbreviated technical note placed after the character's name to indicate how the voice will be heard onscreen, for example, if the character is speaking as a voice-over, it would appear as LIAM (V.O.). Transition Indent: Left: 4.0" Right: 0.0" Width: 2.0" Transitions are film editing instructions, and generally only appear in a shooting script. Transition verbiage includes: CUT TO: DISSOLVE TO: SMASH CUT: QUICK CUT: FADE TO: As a spec script writer, you should avoid using a transition unless there is no other way to indicate a story element. For example, you might need to use DISSOLVE TO: to indicate that a large amount of time has passed. Shot Indent: Left: 0.0" Right: 0.0" Width: 6.0" A shot tells the reader the focal point within a scene has changed. Like a transition, there's rarely a time when a spec screenwriter should insert shot directions. Once again, that's the director's job. Examples of Shots: ANGLE ON -- EXTREME CLOSE UP -- PAN TO -- LIAM'S POV -- Spec Script vs. Shooting Script A "spec script" literally means that you are writing a screenplay on speculation. That is, no one is paying you to write the script. You are penning it in hopes of selling the script to a buyer. Spec scripts should stick stringently to established screenwriting rules. Once a script is purchased, it becomes a shooting script, also called a production script. This is a version of the screenplay created for film production. It will include technical instructions, like film editing notes, shots, cuts and the like. All the scenes are numbered, and revisions are marked with a color-coded system. This is done so that the production assistants and director can then arrange the order in which the scenes will be shot for the most efficient use of stage, cast, and location resources. A spec script should NEVER contain the elements of shooting script. The biggest mistake any new screenwriter can make is to submit a script full of production language, including camera angles and editing transitions. It can be very difficult to resist putting this type of language in your script. After all, it's your story and you see it in a very specific way. However, facts are facts. If you want to direct your script, then try to go the independent filmmaker route. But if you want to sell your script, then stick to the accepted spec screenplay format. Screenplay Formatting Software Screenwriting software makes producing an Industry-standard script simple and straightforward. Programs like Final Draft and Movie Magic Screenwriter put your words into proper screenplay format as you type, letting you focus on a well-told story rather than the chore of margins and spacing. There’s also a wide spectrum of outlining and development software at the ready to help you get your thoughts together before you begin writing. Popular story development software includes Dramatica Pro, a step-by-step guide to the storytelling process, Contour, a character-based structuring system, and Save the Cat!, a program centered on successful screenwriter Blake Snyder’s own proven methods. And if you want a program that combines story development and formatting? Check out Movie Outline, an all-in-one development package that uses step outlining to build your story, scene-by-scene, and Montage, which includes both outline and submission tracking functions. Script Presentation and Binding Just like the format of a script, there are very specific rules for binding and presenting your script. The first page is the title page, which should also be written in Courier 12pt font. No graphics, no fancy pictures, only the title of your script, with “written by” and your name in the center of the page. In the lower left-hand or right-hand corner, enter your contact information. In the lower left-hand or right-hand corner you can put Registered, WGA or a copyright notification, though this is generally not a requirement.

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Abhinaya


To the cognoscente, its comprehensive treatment of artistic experience, expression and communication, content and form, emerges from an integral vision that flowers into a many-branched tree of all Indian arts. Among them, all eight recognised classical dances invariably draw on Natya Shastra to lay down four veritable tenets: eloquent facial expressions (satvik abhinaya); well-defined movements of the limbs and torso (angik abhinaya); foundation in musical narrative and mnemonics (vachik abhinaya); and supportive props, decorations, jewellery and costumes (aharya abhinaya).

Body Division -


The entire body is divided as Anga, Pratyanga and Upaanga. Pratynaga and Upaangas should move along with the Angas. Anga: Head, Hands, Chest, Waist, Bottom, Legs - are the 6 Angas. Sometimes Neck also included. Pratyangas: Shoulders, Arms, elbow , Stomuch, thighs, Knee are the Six Pratyangas. Some people include Wrist and Ankle also Upaangas: Sight, Eyebrow, Eye lids, Eye balls, Cheeks, Nose, Gums, Lower Lip, Teeth, Tongue, Chin and Face are the 12 Upaangas. Few people include Heels, Fingers, Feet, Palm also into upaangas. Angik Abinaya divides in 3 parts : [1] Sharira [2] Mukhaj [3] Cheshtha Sharira Abhinaya includes - Bheda: Head Movements – शिरोभेदा Chest Movements - Vakshya Bheda Neck Movments - Greevabheda, Waist Movements - Paarshva Bheda Bottom Movements - Kati Bheda Hasta Bheda - Mudra - For more details click here Paad Bheda - For more details click here Uru Bheda Udar Bheda Jangha Bheda Mukhaj Abhinaya: Eyes Movements - Drusti bheda Tara Bheda Bhru Bheda Nasika Bheda Adhar Bheda Hanu Bheda Vadan Bheda